Story: The Lion, the Thief, and Avon

[vilakins]

I've finished my B7 / Narnia crossover, just in time for New Year! Thanks very much to astrogirl2 and kerravonsen for beta-reading. :-)

I started writing it for picowrimo (5000 words in a month) and it's now just over twice that. I wanted to write something fun after several serious stories, and I hope it amuses.

The Lion, the Thief, and Avon

Comments

[jhall1.livejournal.com]

That's lovely. :)

I'd only just had lunch, but your description of tea with the Otters made me feel hungry.

Just one sentence seemed to have escaped the proof-reading, with two typos in it, a surplus "I" and a missing "to":

I suppressed the I desire to make a the obvious pun and looked at the pictures again (very nice shaded drawings) and I was almost overcome by the desire stroke a cheetah's soft fur.

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

How did three of us miss that? Thanks, I'll fix that right away.

[astrogirl2.livejournal.com]

D'oh!

Though, I have to say, I had a serious problem beta-ing this story, as I kept having a tendency to get caught up in enjoying it and forget what I was doing. :)

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Thank you!