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Nico ([personal profile] vilakins) wrote2011-09-30 07:26 pm
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Multiverse stories

I wrote two Multiverse stories this year.

Necessary Force (Blake's 7 / Star Wars)
The Time Traveller Trap (Stargate Atlantis / Doctor Who)

They haven't been beta-read due to my beta reader being on holiday, so if you find any typos that slipped by me, do tell me.

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gwendraith: credit? (star trek)

[personal profile] gwendraith 2011-09-30 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Very good! I admire anyone who manages to put together stories of any type :) I don't think I'd have the patience although I quite like reading other people's efforts.
vilakins: (boyz on the lib)

[personal profile] vilakins 2011-10-01 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

I got onto LJ through my fannish fic-writing friends (alliteration unintended).
corvuscornix: (Vila)

[personal profile] corvuscornix 2011-09-30 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, see this PGP I had no trouble reading. Sweet and well-balanced. (And funny, of course.)

"Not spelled like that, anyway," said Avon

Heh. Sometimes I wonder if their love of wordplay is the most important common ground these two share... :-)
vilakins: Vila with stars superimposed (friends)

[personal profile] vilakins 2011-10-01 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
They do seem to enjoy the banter and I notice how little there is in S4. I think it would be a sign that the friendship was coming back if it returned.

[identity profile] ultrapsychobrat.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
I got an error message when I tried to access the two stories. ????
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[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 09:36 am (UTC)(link)
The archive was failing for me too when I was trying to reply to a comment there; they're overloaded. It's fine now; at least I just got in.

[identity profile] jhall1.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
I can access the stories OK, though pages from the site seem very slow to load at present.

I haven't time to read the stories right now, but hope to remember to do so later on today.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 09:37 am (UTC)(link)
The site's overloaded right now; I have no idea why.

[identity profile] jhall1.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Just tried to read your stories, but unfortunately the side was slower than ever to load so I had to give up. I wonder if they are just victims of their own success or whether someone has launched a Denial of Service attack on then.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2011-10-01 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
It can't be Multiverse slowing it down as there aren't many prompts claimed so there wouldn't be many people putting stories up at once. Perhaps some huge challenge is going on.

[identity profile] gracewillow.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 11:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, a B7/SW crossover? Soon as I have time (later in the day) I will read it.

Can also serve as beta if you need one.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Great! Let me know if you see anything there. :-)

[identity profile] gracewillow.livejournal.com 2011-09-30 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
This was, in no particular order, both hilarious and dead on target! Best line: Avon being born with a black spoon in his mouth. LOL!

Seriously, you've got all three--excuse me, four counting Servalan--characters absolutely right, not to mention Vila and Avon's relationship with each other. A really good story, a pleasure to read. :)

Only noticed one typo--in the paragraph that begins "He seems to think..." you've got "more interest that"--presumably should be "more interest than."

Moar plz?

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2011-10-01 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

And thanks for spotting that typo. It's fixed now.

You want more? I have more stories than you can shake a stick at (http://www.farsight.net.nz/fiction/index.htm) on my B7 site Breaking Orbit (http://www.farsight.net.nz/), with links to most of my LJ-only stories (http://www.farsight.net.nz/fiction/ljfiction.htm). There are crossovers too but this is the first Star Wars one I've written. The site's not up-to-date because I got a new computer a couple of months ago and I still haven't re-installed the software I use to maintain it. This weekend, I hope!
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