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Nico ([personal profile] vilakins) wrote2005-06-07 09:51 pm
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Jarriere ficathon story: Chance Meeting

Here's my story for the Blake's 7 Jarriere ficathon.

Chance Meeting

I wrote it for [livejournal.com profile] hawkeye7 whose request was simply that Avon be in it. My thanks to [livejournal.com profile] astrogirl2 for her beta.

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2005-06-07 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, lovely... ice cream, one of my favourite bits of Avon fanon (though those flavours sound... errr...)

And it all made (non)sense within the episode!

Yet another wonderful bit of fun, thank you!

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-07 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, I like all those flavours, except for mangan, haggis, and porridge that is.

[identity profile] mistraltoes.livejournal.com 2005-06-07 12:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Super! Love the ice cream, love Avon and Jarriere knowing each other, love the bird, the conversation about costumes. Very good Jarriere. And liked Avon's remark about beaks and claws getting into things, and them drinking to Jarriere - pretty much everything.

One thing - I'm wondering if you left out a word in this sentence, after 'with':

Avon glared as he loaded his spoon with "Imminent danger of our lives...

I hope you'll write more Jarriere some time in future! :)

[identity profile] astrogirl2.livejournal.com 2005-06-07 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Avon glared as he loaded his spoon with "Imminent danger of our lives...

How the hell did I miss that?! *slaps self for being bad beta*

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-07 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I might have added it later; I did fiddle with the ending.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-07 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Aaugh! There was meant to be a flavour there. OK, read it as mango (though he hated to admit Vila was right) and macadamia.

Damn. As it's on my site, I can't fix it till I get home. :-(
ext_6322: (Jarriere)

[identity profile] kalypso-v.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely one, and Duncan's probably the closest of the other seven to Grego, which is not to say that I haven't really enjoyed meeting all the other six!

For some reason, I really liked "statues of people clutching at what looked like towels"...

once it crapped on her shoulder

Ah, I always suspected something like that!

And I loved Orac wanting to teleport them out because of the danger posed by the "saturated fats and sugar".

He gently unhooked the bird from his hair, stroked it, set it back on his shoulder, and gave Avon and Vila a birdlike look of his own.

And that's just perfect.
ext_6322: (Jarriere)

PS

[identity profile] kalypso-v.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
And as I mentioned there, it does segue rather smoothly into [livejournal.com profile] lazy_neutrino's!

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I just read that and it's wonderful! It does!

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! From a Jarrigoth, that's praise indeed. :-D I always thought he was a technician on Freedom City to do the fiddly bits with Travis's arm.
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[identity profile] kalypso-v.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
He's a lot of things!

This is my newest icon, and probably belongs in the comments here...

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
It does! Very appropriate. I must make more icons now I've got more to play with, and also check out Lisa's latest screencaps for pics.
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[identity profile] hawkeye7.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
If I'd known that you would get the assignment, I would have added that I wanted Vila in the story as well. No matter - you threw him in anyway!

Thankyou for this story! Much appreciated.

I can't recall when I first heard the fanon about Avon's taste for ice cream. It goes back a long way. I remember one online discussion where [livejournal.com profile] kannaophelia had me searching all over town for Tia Maria and Macadamia nut ice cream (found it!)

Loved this bit:
"I'm a Man in Black, watching out for invading aliens. A Black Watch, ye might say."
Tee hee.

PS: What the heck is mangan? I tried searching on the net but all I get is references to some kind of ore.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2005-06-08 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
It's the stuff Avon and Nebrox eat on Domo. It looked pretty nasty. Now I'm worried I spelled it wrong. [goes to look at the Sevencyclopaedia]. Damn, it's mangon, but that's even better for the story. I'll change that. According to them, it's a stew made from fungus. :-P

I'm glad you liked the story. Apparently there was to be a scene in 'Gambit' where Avon and Vila discover the delights of ice cream on the Rink, hence Avon eating some in the casino and saying he felt ill. That's where the stories come from and ever since I heard that, I wanted to write the missing scene.