Blakathon story: Exposé

[vilakins]

Here's my Blakathon story. I wrote for mistraltoes who wanted:

• Blake interacting primarily with somebody not Avon; Jenna or Vila would be nice
  
• the story to relate to the episode Shadow
  
• and have tomatoes

I hope there's enough Blake in it; there are indeed tomatoes. It's set shortly after 'Shadow' and is gen.

Exposé

Comments

[mistraltoes.livejournal.com]

Yay! I love it; laughed almost all the way through. Good voices, as usual. Love the whole fluffy-cheeked exchange, and tomatoes all the way through. How sweet of Vila to think of Gan. Especially ROFL at 'what would Avon say?' How lucky am I to get such an answer to my challenge that suits my tastes so well. Thank you.

[mistraltoes.livejournal.com]

Forgot to say how much I liked Vila's line about the prisons.

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried whether there was enough Blake.

So, did you eat a tomato while reading it? :-P

[hafren.livejournal.com]

What I liked best was Avon desperately trying not to show how concerned he was about Vila's safety.

[mistraltoes.livejournal.com]

Oh, good, perhaps I wasn't imagining it, then. :)

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

No, you weren't. :-)

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Yay, you noticed!

[entropy-house.livejournal.com]

*grin* A mission that didn't involve blowing things up! Yay!

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Don't let RPG Cally hear you. ;-)

I'm at work so I haven't had a chance to read any stories yet. I'm looking forward to them all.

[entropy-house.livejournal.com]

I think they all turned out great. There are 7 up, and hopes that 2 more will be done in a few days. I've printing them to make my own Blakathon 'zine'. I have a binder with spaces for 7 photos in pockets in the front cover, which will work out nicely.

[snowgrouse.livejournal.com]

Stefan Mazey isn't a pun on Steven Pacey, I hope;). Tee hee. I LOVED THIS. Fluffy-cheeked amateur! BWHAAA! *loves Cally to bits*

Be prepared to have jekesta explode in joy at juggling Vila;).

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Stefan Mazey isn't a pun on Steven Pacey, I hope.

It never occurred to me! Actually I was desperate for a name and grabbed my current boss's one: Stephanie Mazey.

[snowgrouse.livejournal.com]

Eep:). I just thought it sounded so alike, I was worried there a bit!

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

I'll change it when I get home then. :-(

[snowgrouse.livejournal.com]

Nooooooo! Don't change it! Wah! *flails* Forget I said anything! No need to change any single bit of lovely NicoStuff because Grouse make nutty conclusions! Waaaah!

*restrains you and plonks a Vila on top of you*

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmmm, Vila...

I'll just change the first name from Stefan to something else.

[daiseechain.livejournal.com]

Excellent. Some great lines in there, particularly Cally's. Love the way Blake is a bit naiive and overly confident in his ability to handle the situation, while Vila and Jenna know the real score, and especially that Jenna seems to be showing some respect for Vila's abilities here. You worked the tomatoes into the plot very well.

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Jenna doesn't have that much time for Vila (or Avon) on the Liberator but they seemed to know each other quite well in the holding cells. They certainly knew each other's backgrounds and I see quite a bit of mutual professional respect there.

[pinkdormouse.livejournal.com]

Nice bit of plotting there.

Gina

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I wrote it round the tomatoes in the end. :-P