kernezelda: (Vila)
Kernezelda ([personal profile] kernezelda) wrote in [personal profile] vilakins 2004-08-16 08:13 pm (UTC)

Thank you. I like this quite a lot.

Avon has always cut himself off from anything that can affect him, and Anna's betrayal proves him right, after all. Except he's not right, and a life without warmth or feeling is no life at all.

Cally's loss is tempered with her self-assessment and recognition of why she remains with Liberator. I like the way she and Vila work together to pull Avon out of his (virtual) suicidal notion.

The concept of the young nebula, a lifeform so different, yet able to learn and feel, is a lovely backdrop. Especially nice is the image of the tendril reaching out wistfully.

Again, thank you very much.

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